“Nothing happens until someone sells something” is as true today as it ever was. And an awful lot of selling happens through the written word, in marketing pieces and sales letters and on your web site.

The odds are that you’re not a professional copywriter, but you still have to sell with written words. That’s why you need Words that Sell by Richard Bayan.

The subtitle of the book is, “The thesaurus to help you promote your products, services and ideas.” That’s a great description of what’s inside, even though you’ll find collections of both words and phrases under various headings.

Part 1 is “Grabbers” with lists of “Heads and Slogans,” “Salutations and Invitations.” and “Snappy Transitions.” There are also thee sections devoted to openings.

Words and phrases for “Descriptions and Benefits” make up Part 2. There are forty collections of words and phrases with titles like “Authentic,” “Exciting/Stimulating,” “Experienced/Expert,” “Informative,” “Reliable,” and “Results.”

In Part 3 you’ll find three collections of “Clinchers.” Different ways to express “Terms and Offers” are in Part 4. Part 5 has “Special Strategies” including “Justifying a High Price” and “Using Demographics.”

And, in the “but wait, there’s more” department, Bayan also put together a helpful appendix. My favorite part of the appendix is “Puffspeak—and Its Alternative.”

Bottom Line

If you need to write to boost your business or career, Words that Sell should be right next to where you work.

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If you’re a copywriter or a marketing student, you’ve probably heard of the AIDA formula. The formula was originally created by advertising pioneer E. St. Elmo Lewis in the Nineteenth Century to reflect four stages of selling. In the original and most common version of the formula, the letters stand for the following things.

Attention
Interest
Desire
Action

I’ve been using the formula for decades, but I modified it to reflect some of what we’ve learned about how human beings think and buy. Here’s my version.

Attention. You get attention with your headline. The headline should stop the reader and inspire them to read your copy.

Involvement. Establish emotional involvement with stories or examples or engagement devices like quizzes.

Data. Support your claims with data. Great copy mixes emotional involvement with facts that support the feelings.

Action. After you’ve made your point emotionally and logically, ask the reader to do something. It might be asking for more information or buying a product or anything you choose. Asking the reader to take a specific action is the best way to increase the odds that they will do it.

Bottom Line

AIDA is a copy formula that’s worked for over a century. Use it to make your web pages and marketing copy better.

“How many ‘friends’ do you think will read that?”

Ed’s soft voice cut into my writing concentration. “Well?” he demanded.

Ed was my first real writing mentor, my boss on a job where I was writing direct response letters. I didn’t get the point and I knew the best course was to ask Ed what he meant, so I did.

“You just wrote ‘Dear Friends’ as a salutation.” Ed said. “How many personal letters have you ever gotten that started with a plural greeting?”

Suddenly, I got it. Only one person reads your copy at a time, whether it’s in a letter or in a blog post or on a web page. So write as if you were writing or talking to one person.

Forget “Hello everybody” and “Dear Friends” and write for a single person, your reader. That person is reading your copy all alone. Write like you understand that.

Bottom Line

If you want to write effectively, write to a single person.

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